Essay Excellence: Common App Personal Essay Comprehensive Support

Essay Excellence: Common App Personal Essay Comprehensive Support

Offered by Bruce J.

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My Roadmap Makes Writing Your Authentic Admission Essay Faster and Easier

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The personal essay is your only chance to speak directly to the admissions team and convince them you belong in their next incoming class. Take your best shot at it with 1 on 1 coaching that makes your essay as outstanding and unique as you. You'll get personal attention through every step of the writing process – from brainstorming to proofreading – with the focus on getting you admitted with less stress. Package includes: • 5 hours of online and/or phone meetings • 5 rounds of editing review plus 1 final round of proofreading • Intro guide to the personal statement • Preparatory exercises • Personalized timeline • Sample essays • Email support with 24-hour response time, usually sooner • 48-hour turnaround for comments This package is for you if want to convince colleges to admit you, but especially if you are a: • STEM candidate who needs help with writing and self-expression • First-generation or international student unfamiliar with the personal essay • Student athlete • Student with learning disabilities • Artist • High school student uncomfortable talking about themselves What will working together be like? • You’ll get a head start with an introductory guide that will make you feel comfortable approaching the personal essay. • We’ll plot out a project timeline that works for your schedule. • Then we’ll meet by Zoom or phone to bring out your unique story. • You’ll start drafting with my low-stress approach to writing. • We’ll continue to meet to hone your story and boost its impact. • You’ll get up to 5 rounds of detailed edits to make sure your writing is clear and compelling and your message will resonate with admissions officers. • You’ll get unlimited email support during the project timeline for answers to all your questions. • When you’re ready, you’ll get one final proofread so you can feel confident when you hit the “Submit” button. Response Time I respond within 24 hours and deliver feedback on drafts within 48 hours. Package Duration • We will determine a personalized project timeline for you that generally lasts about a month, which will give you time to think and write but give you some discipline so you don’t drag out the process. • During that time, you can schedule our 1 on 1 meetings, submit drafts for review, and receive unlimited email support. • Additional services, such as supplemental essays for individual colleges, are available for a separate fee.


How will this coaching take place?

This package will be delivered via live sessions.


Services included with this package:

Editing

Essays


Additional details

Standard Refund Policy
3 months to use after purchase

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Bruce J.

Offered by Bruce J.

Joined June 2022

5.0

My Roadmap Makes Writing Your Authentic Admission Essay Faster and Easier

Using my Admission Essay Roadmap and unique "spoken writing" approach, I've helped students get admitted to Cornell, MIT, Rice, Colgate, Wesleyan, and many other prestigious private and public universities: “My acceptance letter had a note attached saying they enjoyed my essay.” - NL “I just wanted to thank you because I just found out I got in! I don’t think anyone else could’ve made that essay work!” - MG “You helped me tremendously. I appreciated how you guided me, but the final piece was my words.” - RA “My son needed a good push. The guidance you provided was unique, immediate, and tangible." - JA Use my experience in higher education and marketing to discover and craft your unique story so admissions officers will see you belong on their campus: • Brown University: A.B. with honors, Magna cum laude, winner of List Award for Outstanding Honors Thesis • Johns Hopkins University: M.A. in Art History • Alumni interviewer for Brown • Adjunct Professor of Marketing • Writer and creative director for global companies like American Express, T-Mobile, and AT&T. • Marketing and recruitment director for the Hudson Graduate Centers of Long Island University I treat applicants like clients, not kids or students. And I collaborate with them to make improvements, not issue grades or critiques. My innovative spoken writing approach takes the pressure off, so we can focus on convincing admissions officers to admit you!

Coaches professionally

50+ people coached for College

Open to working with clients outside the U.S.

$2,500

15h–25h of coaching